Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/10/17, 9:59 AM
You did very well. A time-stop story is well worth reading here. If possible, please add more characters to be played with by the protagonist during the time freezing, like the most arrogant ones, cops, coaches, bikers, jocks... really enjoy the time when these hunks have no choice but to be molested! What's more, how about some foot fetish?
Anonymous
7/10/17, 8:46 AM
I'd add in some more detail with the sex part and descriptions of the guys
Anonymous
7/10/17, 8:20 AM
Hi! The next year there will be a big movie about a black superhero, and I was thinking, would be pretty hot if you write a story about a black superhero being mind fucked by a villain, and gets turned into a stereotypical racial spoof of himself, a mock of his heroic identity, always ready to sexualy serve criminals. Or the hero would be turned into a low criminal stereotype with few memories of his former self, trapped by his own desires, too horny to be a hero again. I think that would be something very erotic, and you would do it perfectly!
Anonymous
7/10/17, 6:42 AM
This story was just plain, well-thought out and expertly written. I can honestly say that I was enthralled and captivated with the writing style as well as the situation in its entirety. Good job to both of the authors for this marvelous written piece.
Anonymous
7/10/17, 6:14 AM
While I understand you had to keep the scenario is short due to the word limit provided. This was excellent, as usual. I enjoyed your first chapter immensely! This one did not disappoint! I don't know whether you plan to continue this? Doesn't seem like it, based on how it ended. I look forward to seeing more of your work!! :D
Taro
7/10/17, 6:08 AM
Can't wait for next chapter :)
ChaoticDjinn
7/10/17, 4:04 AM
As a little side note, i apologize if this seems a little bit condensed to some. it was done as a part of a commission and restricted to a certain word count. That being said, i'm opening up a Patreon very soon and will have some of my origional works popping up on there, ones where i just free write with no limits, so they should be more full and fleshed out feeling. Much of what i write there will eventually find its way here, after a time delay.
Anonymous
7/10/17, 3:34 AM
Interesting.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
7/10/17, 2:37 AM
Excellent so far. Looking forward to more.
UchihaDEMS
7/10/17, 2:15 AM
If we are going to talk about tastes, as I said in the previous chapter, I would love to see him fool around with an older man rather than his acquaintances. But, as you said, you write what you want to read and thats cool, I respect that. Please, do continue~