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7/10/17, 12:48 AM
And to clarify, yes that was what I meant with Eddy and Isaac. Like he was being carried around on Isaacs cock, supported by Isaac holding up Eddy's legs
7/10/17, 12:44 AM
Thank You! I appreciate the feedback. Yea that scene was a bit muddy. I couldn't think up of the right words at that time when I was writing, and I was just very excited to put this out. Should give it more time to cool, and then look at it over again. Again, thanks for the read and advice :)
Anonymous
7/10/17, 12:36 AM
Hey! Great story. You're a great writer, really enjoying this. But I do have some feedback. I felt kind of lost reading about the scene between Eddy and isaac. It felt like they teleported between positions or something. It wasn't clear what you meant when he said he and Eddy walked over to Alicia, or that he put Eddy's legs up. You mean he picked Eddy up and was carrying him around on his cock like luggage or something? I just felt some of the descriptions in this otherwise hot scene needed a little more fleshing out. It was hard to imagine a guy effortlessly picking up another guy without any sort of exertion. I also felt the bits about Isaac's personal life was a teeny bit dragged out. I hope you don't take this personally though! I recognize great writing potential in you, and look forward to reading more :) Very hot stuff we have here.
Jul 8, 2017
Anonymous
7/10/17, 12:14 AM
Thanks guys, glad to hear you've enjoyed it, and that my stories have such an intense effect on your garpigs!
Anonymous
7/9/17, 11:36 PM
Oh my god please continue. We need more good timestop stories.
ChaoticDjinn
7/9/17, 8:50 PM
I might wind up doing something of a continuation for this story, or using the same app, but i doubt i'll do something from the other guys perspective. From how it is in my head at least, there's very little story there. Thanks for the comments all :3
Anonymous
7/9/17, 8:43 PM
I also want this to continue. Not enough time stop stories.
UchihaDEMS
7/9/17, 6:39 PM
I'd like to see more. Time stop is rare and I love it! Any chances to get to play with the teachers as well?
Jul 8, 2017
Anonymous
7/9/17, 6:26 PM
Another fuckn' hot gar story Bear!! Made my Daddy dick hard! Your stories are required reading for my garpigs. Nothing hotter then seeing a newbie taking the first tentative puffs on a big,fat Maduro losing his self to the thick smoke. Becoming the smokepig he deep down dreamed of becoming
Anonymous
7/9/17, 5:30 PM
Any chance of new victims?