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Anonymous
7/5/17, 8:33 PM
I was wondering whether "special protein" or "special liquid" are secret language or literary something altered chemically.
Anonymous
7/5/17, 8:25 PM
221 Days after... any "old" human race still exists?
Anonymous
7/5/17, 8:17 PM
It could be more erotic to describe individuals' appearance and changes, hair style (bob hair to buzz cut...etc), attire (nerdish school wear to muscle T/compression wears), facial expressions/features and so on. If it was a sci-fi story, I would love to see eye color change...etc You did occasionally and it was really hot. I hope you do constantly...
MalSkin
7/5/17, 8:16 PM
I really hope that you are going to carry on with this story as it was getting interesting at the end of this chapter - I enjoyed what I read - thanks
Anonymous
7/5/17, 8:03 PM
It's definitely different than other writings on this site, but I wouldn't call it rubbish. I'm interested to see where you go with it.
7/5/17, 7:55 PM
This is getting good. Please continue.
7/5/17, 7:50 PM
Please continue this. I'm interested to see where it leads.
Anonymous
7/5/17, 7:16 PM
a bit on the nose with "rapeseed" lol
Anonymous
7/5/17, 6:50 PM
Man, iv read this and the other like 5x each. so good. I really hope you do a bunch more like this as you said above, your writing is really amazing and can picture every bit of it, the more detail the better. love if somehow a side effect from the "cocoon" was that they got hairier or something?
Anonymous
7/5/17, 6:32 PM
I hope your plan includes some protagonists, including scientists, who got aware of these incidents and started investigations. I won't expect they saved the Earth, though. Readers need some hope, which makes the shadows much darker.