Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/4/17, 5:52 AM
It may be just me, but if you continue, I'd like to see evidence of (at least some pieces of) individual personality surviving the transfer. Otherwise this is just serial murder.
Anonymous
7/4/17, 4:56 AM
It would be awesome that you mention little more about Coach's team (name/team color...etc) and make Bradley and his colleagues (and Caleb) wear the same team outfits. Bradley is establishing bonds and frienship but still remains building his body at the gym. Can't wait he joins team practices and develop agility/learn plays.
Jun 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/4/17, 4:03 AM
Probably not. Willie don't do episodes.
Willie CIci
7/4/17, 4:02 AM
I always enjoy reading your stories. This was was hot. I can't wait to see what your skilled writing and ingenious mind create for its continuation. There should be no doubt in your mind. This deserves a follow-up, if not more. Series - several chapters. Other farmhands interacting with the other melons in the melon patch. Let it rip!!!
nycboot
7/3/17, 8:53 PM
Reminds me of Invasions of the Body Snatchers. Looking forward to see how you continue this! :)
Anonymous
7/3/17, 7:39 PM
omg! more!! please!! wow so amazing
Anonymous
7/3/17, 7:35 PM
I loved this from start to finish! Please do more in this universe, it was so HOT!
Anonymous
7/3/17, 7:35 PM
Thank God for the internet
Anonymous
7/3/17, 7:20 PM
really hot!
LongtimeFan
7/3/17, 7:19 PM
This is great, Hypnothrill! I love when you focus on the mentality of the brainwashed individuals. I liked Construction Tools 3 myself--to be honest, sometimes I prefer the lack of sex acts to more focus on the hypnosis and personality changing. But you should write what YOU want--you'll always have me and, going from these comments, other readers to back you up! :)