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hypnothrill@yahoo.com
7/3/17, 11:44 AM
Thanks for the comment! The funny thing is that Construction Tools 3 was actually slightly longer than parts 1 or 2. It might have just felt short because it had fewer scenes with overt sex or nudity; it was more about the characters' mindsets changing. I have a lot of fun writing that material, but I can see why it would have less appeal to many readers.
Anonymous
7/3/17, 11:28 AM
Great story, thanks for posting. I think your last story didnt get as much response as your other story was because its abit on the short side, with not much going on. Its just sort of a niche addition to the other stories in its universe.
Anonymous
7/3/17, 11:24 AM
Fucking Hot! Can't wait to read more :)
Anonymous
7/3/17, 9:48 AM
I would love to see a more convenient method of the melons to reach to other places or another method of transformation would be hot too.
Anonymous
7/3/17, 12:19 AM
I am confident that this would be a new classic!! Good Job!!
Anonymous
7/2/17, 11:39 PM
I could see Bradley became eye-blindedly loyal and obedient to Coach especially after he learned power, pleasure and victories in addition to his scholarship. Coach must be quite manipulative.
Anonymous
7/2/17, 10:18 PM
Does anyone investigate Foreman?
Jun 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/2/17, 8:40 PM
Does it continue?
Anonymous
7/2/17, 7:51 PM
my favorite line- "I wanted to start stroking myself, but it seemed a little too gay to beat off while this guy was fucking me."
Anonymous
7/2/17, 6:39 PM
Great story for Sunday reading. Thanks a lot.