Recent Comments

aji
6/30/17, 12:20 AM
Oh god very hot story. A little bit disappointed tho to know that they are going to play master-slave, I would think that it would be best if they are romantic love birds
Anonymous
6/29/17, 11:09 PM
I like the development but it does feel a little 'too smooth', and hope the next chapter will be even more compelling.
Anonymous
6/29/17, 11:08 PM
This is great so far. I think that our minds go to the same dark place :). -Dr. Strangelove from https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/6284
Anonymous
6/29/17, 9:47 PM
Finally!
Anonymous
6/29/17, 9:43 PM
I'm sorry, 4,133 word so far and still no sex to speak of? Please...
Anonymous
6/29/17, 8:52 PM
OMG love it. You should keep it going!
Anonymous
6/29/17, 5:25 PM
Very hot! Great job can't wait for more!
AUK
6/29/17, 5:09 PM
More and turn him gay
Anonymous
6/29/17, 4:04 PM
I like this.
Anonymous
6/29/17, 3:27 PM
MJordan, your sex scene is so hot. I appreciate you spend spaces for conversations between key characters. Their interactions often insist gradual change of Bradley. Can't wait the day he be on the field.