Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/28/17, 3:30 PM
Good story! Adverbs and adjectives all in the right places. LOL!
Anonymous
6/28/17, 3:30 PM
Great story! Loved it!
Anonymous
6/28/17, 3:29 PM
Good story! Adverbs and adjectives all in the right places. LOL!
Jun 24, 2017
Anonymous
6/28/17, 3:29 PM
Good story! Adverbs and adjectives all in the right places. LOL!
Anonymous
6/28/17, 3:28 PM
Good story! The descriptions were fine. Adverbs and adjectives all in place. LOL!
Anonymous
6/28/17, 3:26 PM
great continuation. It looks like the same construction company is spreading globally!
Jun 27, 2017
Anonymous
6/28/17, 3:21 PM
If the next installment allows the 'dreamer' to explore his new body, then this was a good start. Otherwise, boring as shit.
Jun 27, 2017
Anonymous
6/28/17, 2:14 PM
keep up with this man ... ignore the person above this comment.
Anonymous
6/28/17, 1:27 PM
I wanna be a horny jock boy...it's so great. It could be more great if you touch upon how Bradley's faceial ecpresion changed or remained the same while he is under Coach's control.
Jun 27, 2017
Anonymous
6/28/17, 1:24 PM
boring