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Anonymous
6/28/17, 5:30 AM
How much description do you people need?
Jun 25, 2017
Anonymous
6/28/17, 5:29 AM
This was a great read. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep 'em coming.
Anonymous
6/28/17, 5:28 AM
I don't what all the excitement it for this story and for the first installment. Maybe I don't get it. Writing was not elevated either.
xORRiNx
6/28/17, 4:32 AM
@ mattersonline: Heard!! I definitely hear ya on all of that. I've explored that 'world' on tumblr and it's very spotty where there are good captions. They aren't added often either. Many are as you say, they lack detail in general. Your kind words are the ultimate kind of support to be honest :)
mattersonline
6/28/17, 3:39 AM
I personally hate photo caption stories. Often times they are just an excuse for authors to let their writing quality drop. With the photos the author no longer needs to give detailed descriptions and that ruins it for me. Often times it also seems like people who make photo caption stories only tell the stories in the past tense because they only have one photo and that bothers me. I love your writing Orrin. If I had money I'd patreon you.
Anonymous
6/28/17, 3:34 AM
I looooooooove stories with huge swelling nuts!
Anonymous
6/28/17, 2:59 AM
I love alternate endings. Awesome job
Anonymous
6/28/17, 2:13 AM
Yes please continue this You have a hit here
Anonymous
6/28/17, 1:45 AM
Very interesting I enjoyed this Hopefully at least a follow up
Anonymous
6/28/17, 1:19 AM
We appreciate you posted in such a short period of time...and this one is great. Love you started explaining or revealing Coach's hypnosis session more and described some changes of physical appearance a little bit. I hope you will continue doing so. Fantastic chapter !!