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mattersonline
6/28/17, 3:39 AM
I personally hate photo caption stories. Often times they are just an excuse for authors to let their writing quality drop. With the photos the author no longer needs to give detailed descriptions and that ruins it for me. Often times it also seems like people who make photo caption stories only tell the stories in the past tense because they only have one photo and that bothers me. I love your writing Orrin. If I had money I'd patreon you.
Anonymous
6/28/17, 3:34 AM
I looooooooove stories with huge swelling nuts!
Anonymous
6/28/17, 2:59 AM
I love alternate endings. Awesome job
Anonymous
6/28/17, 2:13 AM
Yes please continue this You have a hit here
Anonymous
6/28/17, 1:45 AM
Very interesting I enjoyed this Hopefully at least a follow up
Anonymous
6/28/17, 1:19 AM
We appreciate you posted in such a short period of time...and this one is great. Love you started explaining or revealing Coach's hypnosis session more and described some changes of physical appearance a little bit. I hope you will continue doing so. Fantastic chapter !!
Anonymous
6/28/17, 1:06 AM
Awesome!! Love it.
Anonymous
6/28/17, 1:06 AM
It looks like this brand new tight end Bradley would be permanently horny...glad to know he is changing literally. Hope you touched upon how his college life changed during these two or three months.
Jun 25, 2017
JohnnyAdams
6/28/17, 12:41 AM
Unexpected but enjoyable!
Stefano
6/27/17, 11:44 PM
Very good sex scene. Usually the writing here is good at telling transformations and the lead up to the "act", but not so great with sexual activity However this story had hot sex described. Thanks for the boner