Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/25/17, 5:59 PM
Absman420's "The Bulldawg Maker": http://ncmc.webfactional.com/ncmc/story/424/ ^ The link doesn't work anymore. did you have it saved elsewhere by any chance?
Jun 24, 2017
Donkbutt
6/25/17, 4:31 PM
Willie, always great to see your writing..But...You are getting SUPER lazy. No descriptions, just links to tumblr pics. Sex is reduced down to 'he sucks his cock. He blows his wad' Slow down on the next one and actually make us care about these characters. Be descriptive and let imagination work.
Donkbutt
6/25/17, 4:27 PM
Great story Nicky! Are you going to finish Say Uncle? That was getting really good
Anonymous
6/25/17, 3:48 PM
Tight end, tight ass? So hot
Manluv
6/25/17, 3:42 PM
Thanks for all of the comments. Will get to Day Two as soon as I can.
Manluv
6/25/17, 3:41 PM
I'm an English major, thanks. Typos can happen to anyone. Especially with autocorrect.
Anonymous
6/25/17, 3:19 PM
One note to keep in mind: "Your" is possessive. "I like your story " "You're" is a contraction for "you are". "You are (you're) a good writer."
Anonymous
6/25/17, 2:23 PM
This is amazing cannot wait for more!!!!!
Anonymous
6/25/17, 1:48 PM
Loved this series. For a moment I thought the reason Seb was surprised was because some of his power rubbed off on Calvin at their first meeting. Please keep writing, I want more adventures with Seb!
Anonymous
6/25/17, 1:35 PM
Fantastic!! Love to see where it would go from here. Can't wait the moment Bradley wore a set of football gears. I wish I could see gears also had some mc functions, which ultimately change him into a jock beast. You had done a nice setup and just need to write to launch from there. We appreciate that.