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Willie Cici
6/24/17, 11:14 PM
I loved this series, but I especially loved this ending. Keep writing, if not for us, for yourself.
InDeep69
6/24/17, 11:07 PM
Last Comment Writer - Johnny transmitted via the iPad's sound wave technology encrypted messages that invaded his central nervous system and changed his behavior and personality. Johnny was able to target the sound wave directly to his target with the pins he first placed on Vinnie and the pins Vinnie placed on the others guys at the gym. First, the sound wave technology was able to read its target's mind. Then, Johnny was able to alter their minds. If you noticed, none of the models ever realized that they were fucking for a living. They always thought they were 'modeling' for $200 a pop. Plus, Johnny had a niche clientele - desperate bottoms. Vinnie and the boys, the alphas they are, remained alpha top dogs. They never got fucked. They fucked. I'm sorry to see this series end. I loved it. Keep it up. LOL!
Anonymous
6/24/17, 7:37 PM
Hot story thank you
Anonymous
6/24/17, 7:00 PM
It's hard to pinpoint a specific part where he seemed to smart. It's just something with his vocabulary, I guess. Maybe as you say it's too much tell and not enough show of his newfound stupidity. That aside, I've really enjoyed this story as it's right up my alley. I hope you have more adventures with Seb planned! I've enjoyed every chapter.
Anonymous
6/24/17, 5:40 PM
Awesome!!
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
6/24/17, 5:17 PM
Disregard my last comment (would delete it but don't see how to do so). I've been working on the final instalment (the epilogue) and was thinking (illogically) that you were referencing things that happen there. Oops. Drop me a note (if you like) and let me know where you think it went wrong (where he sounded too intelligent). Feedback is always appreciated.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
6/24/17, 5:09 PM
Well, he was meant to be smart there at the end for a few minutes... but assuming you don't mean that part. :-)
Jun 24, 2017
Anonymous
6/24/17, 2:40 PM
Great story! Loved it!!
Anonymous
6/24/17, 2:09 PM
I didn't expect a sequel. It is amazing and hot. Love you!!
Anonymous
6/24/17, 1:44 PM
Love these conversation part, still we could see the protagonist's personality. I'd love to see how he interacted with teammates, or even Caleb, after Coach installed Bradley a rough tough tight end persona. Looking forward to see you reveal Coach's evil secret, which you reveal gradually and we are all aware of. Thanks a lot for keeping posting!!