Recent Comments

Jun 24, 2017
Anonymous
6/24/17, 11:13 AM
Terrific story...terrific photos!!
Jun 22, 2017
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
6/24/17, 11:00 AM
I'm thinking about writing a sequel set on Valhalla-14. I just need to make sure that it doesn't seem too repetitive, so I've been mulling over how I want to structure the scenes. Glad that you guys are enjoying this! I should have more sci-fi stories on the way this summer, including my take on "Invasion of the Body Snatchers."
Jun 24, 2017
Anonymous
6/24/17, 10:51 AM
Great work....
Jun 22, 2017
Anonymous
6/24/17, 10:39 AM
Hey hypnothrill, great story! R u going to continue this story btw?
Johnnyadams
6/24/17, 8:29 AM
My all time favorite story
Anonymous
6/24/17, 3:45 AM
Can't wait the next phase of training. I like the way Brad interacted with Vince and his friendship with Caleb downgraded.
Anonymous
6/24/17, 3:40 AM
Loved this series. Could see in my mind the stops in Manhattan.
Anonymous
6/24/17, 3:40 AM
Incredible. Didn't see that ending!
Anonymous
6/24/17, 3:28 AM
Nice translation to the next episodes!!
Cumluvnbottom
6/24/17, 2:11 AM
Apologies it has taken me so long to get back to this story. Just haven't had the drive / energy / creativity (whatever!) to do any writing. To be honest, I'm still not 100% happy with it (too much "telling" instead of "showing") so I'm curious to hear if you liked it or have any constructive criticism.