Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/24/17, 1:44 PM
Love these conversation part, still we could see the protagonist's personality. I'd love to see how he interacted with teammates, or even Caleb, after Coach installed Bradley a rough tough tight end persona. Looking forward to see you reveal Coach's evil secret, which you reveal gradually and we are all aware of. Thanks a lot for keeping posting!!
Anonymous
6/24/17, 1:08 PM
Loved it, but he sounds too smart
Anonymous
6/24/17, 12:46 PM
I'd love to know what Johnny typed in the laptop to get Vince to be his gay lover
Anonymous
6/24/17, 12:32 PM
Loved it!
Jun 24, 2017
Anonymous
6/24/17, 11:13 AM
Terrific story...terrific photos!!
Jun 22, 2017
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
6/24/17, 11:00 AM
I'm thinking about writing a sequel set on Valhalla-14. I just need to make sure that it doesn't seem too repetitive, so I've been mulling over how I want to structure the scenes. Glad that you guys are enjoying this! I should have more sci-fi stories on the way this summer, including my take on "Invasion of the Body Snatchers."
Jun 24, 2017
Anonymous
6/24/17, 10:51 AM
Great work....
Jun 22, 2017
Anonymous
6/24/17, 10:39 AM
Hey hypnothrill, great story! R u going to continue this story btw?
Johnnyadams
6/24/17, 8:29 AM
My all time favorite story
Anonymous
6/24/17, 3:45 AM
Can't wait the next phase of training. I like the way Brad interacted with Vince and his friendship with Caleb downgraded.