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Anonymous
6/24/17, 7:37 PM
Hot story thank you
Anonymous
6/24/17, 7:00 PM
It's hard to pinpoint a specific part where he seemed to smart. It's just something with his vocabulary, I guess. Maybe as you say it's too much tell and not enough show of his newfound stupidity. That aside, I've really enjoyed this story as it's right up my alley. I hope you have more adventures with Seb planned! I've enjoyed every chapter.
Anonymous
6/24/17, 5:40 PM
Awesome!!
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
6/24/17, 5:17 PM
Disregard my last comment (would delete it but don't see how to do so). I've been working on the final instalment (the epilogue) and was thinking (illogically) that you were referencing things that happen there. Oops. Drop me a note (if you like) and let me know where you think it went wrong (where he sounded too intelligent). Feedback is always appreciated.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
6/24/17, 5:09 PM
Well, he was meant to be smart there at the end for a few minutes... but assuming you don't mean that part. :-)
Jun 24, 2017
Anonymous
6/24/17, 2:40 PM
Great story! Loved it!!
Anonymous
6/24/17, 2:09 PM
I didn't expect a sequel. It is amazing and hot. Love you!!
Anonymous
6/24/17, 1:44 PM
Love these conversation part, still we could see the protagonist's personality. I'd love to see how he interacted with teammates, or even Caleb, after Coach installed Bradley a rough tough tight end persona. Looking forward to see you reveal Coach's evil secret, which you reveal gradually and we are all aware of. Thanks a lot for keeping posting!!
Anonymous
6/24/17, 1:08 PM
Loved it, but he sounds too smart
Anonymous
6/24/17, 12:46 PM
I'd love to know what Johnny typed in the laptop to get Vince to be his gay lover