Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/22/17, 9:30 AM
Miss this story big time, re-read it a lot. Can't think of where to take it right now, but I'll mull it over. Really hoping it keeps going, thanks for writing it!
Anonymous
6/22/17, 6:34 AM
I thought it was hot. I actually liked it better without the muscle theft. I'd rather he was still a big masc muscular jock that's made into a total bitch.
Jun 22, 2017
Anonymous
6/22/17, 6:29 AM
Loved it so much
Titan
6/22/17, 5:26 AM
Not to shock any of my readers but I'm close to continuing this story.
Anonymous
6/22/17, 4:23 AM
Nice! and smooth pacing! I think it would be even better if you included some mental resistance or attempts at resisting the hypnosis/commands. Like doubting, questioning, or struggles/refusals.
Jun 22, 2017
Anonymous
6/22/17, 4:16 AM
Loved it
Anonymous
6/22/17, 3:40 AM
Please continue!!!!
Anonymous
6/22/17, 2:37 AM
When can we see the next? ^_^
UchihaDEMS
6/22/17, 1:29 AM
Amazing
Anonymous
6/22/17, 12:35 AM
I gave up. This piece really needs a lot of editing. Also why are no quotation marks used for things that are said? That is just simple grammar and makes things easier to read.