Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/18/17, 9:01 PM
Excellent---loved the slow descent into submission
Anonymous
6/18/17, 8:50 PM
Nice concept---innocent surfing captures the unwary.
Anonymous
6/18/17, 8:42 PM
This is the making of a series. Loved it!!!
Anonymous
6/18/17, 8:38 PM
Great concept---but a little more seduction/induction helps build the anticipation of the payoff
Anonymous
6/18/17, 8:10 PM
Short but a good job. I thought you jumped in a little fast. I would have liked hearing to seduction leading up to the start of the story a little.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
6/18/17, 6:58 PM
This is the attitude a male should have around all men.
Anonymous
6/18/17, 6:35 PM
Excellent series. Each section so damn sexy. Love the club scene and the "not in control" aspect. Continuing this would be great. If I could interject, perhaps a superhero in similar situation. Thanks for the series. Keep up the good work!
Anonymous
6/18/17, 3:43 PM
Too short:( Your stories are always great, though
Anonymous
6/18/17, 3:01 PM
Why the 'rider' at the end? Unnecessary like the ones who apologise right at the start! There was no straight sex in the story As to the story it was ok. Nice premise - bit like the stepford wives - and reasonable execution.
Meatbox
6/18/17, 1:38 PM
Will upload an edited version soon to get rid of the puntuation and grammar issues.