Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/18/17, 5:13 AM
The lack of punctuation, grammar, and sentence structure made this unreadable for me
Anonymous
6/18/17, 4:57 AM
I'm really enjoying this series. Very different from your other stuff. I like it.
Anonymous
6/18/17, 2:17 AM
Thanks for writing. I would love to read more.
Anonymous
6/18/17, 2:06 AM
I just wanted to know what would happen to Alex after the swimmer's build program. You hypno scene is always one of the hottest one!!
LongtimeFan
6/18/17, 1:11 AM
Always a pleasure, Hypnothrill! The description of the men getting dumber and more muscle-obsessed was very hot. I'd be happy to see more of this series; as the person above mentioned, hearing more about how their bodies are changing could be another element (although the mental changes are already great). You write so well, and no matter the story, you'll always have at least one reader! :)
Anonymous
6/17/17, 9:35 PM
Could use more description on each character's body after their debut, but hot concept nevertheless!
Meatbox
6/17/17, 8:37 PM
I know I get it I'll check properly next time and look up the greek alphabet.
Anonymous
6/17/17, 8:32 PM
Great story! Please more! ;-)
Anonymous
6/17/17, 7:41 PM
Love it man, thank you!
Anonymous
6/17/17, 7:19 PM
Awesome work!