Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/17/17, 7:41 PM
Love it man, thank you!
Anonymous
6/17/17, 7:19 PM
Awesome work!
Anonymous
6/17/17, 6:23 PM
HOT ending! The part where Ben helped Alex out of his boxers, giving him that little "push" over the edge was the BEST! I wish this gym was real.
Anonymous
6/17/17, 5:59 PM
Nice job , can't wait for part 2
TandySensation
6/17/17, 5:43 PM
I'm being serious. I DID enjoy the story, but I WAS thrown off by the last part ("okay, I guess we're getting off on rape again tonight..."). I do feel strongly about it, but I hadn't meant to sound so preachy and negative (on a porn site). I got an error when I tried to tag it before.
nnnrg
6/17/17, 4:50 PM
One of your other stories got the comment that you're becoming too dependent on the images. In this case, they worked for the story, but I have also noticed that your descriptions of your characters have become sparse and lazy, which has a negative impact on your writing. Please don't leave out the adjectives! Describe your characters in the text as well as linking images, because your writing becomes more three-dimensional as you do that.
Anonymous
6/17/17, 3:58 PM
I love the part where Ales had gotten aware of something strange but forced to return to the induction. I appreciate this kind of despairing situation.
Anonymous
6/17/17, 3:47 PM
Love this series. If you've got another installment to write, please go ahead. I think everyone will be pleased. You never disappoint!
Anonymous
6/17/17, 3:25 PM
Damn Willie you got a great series here. Guess who the partner is will be revealed next ,if there is a next
Anonymous
6/17/17, 2:46 PM
Great series!!