Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/18/17, 2:06 AM
I just wanted to know what would happen to Alex after the swimmer's build program. You hypno scene is always one of the hottest one!!
LongtimeFan
6/18/17, 1:11 AM
Always a pleasure, Hypnothrill! The description of the men getting dumber and more muscle-obsessed was very hot. I'd be happy to see more of this series; as the person above mentioned, hearing more about how their bodies are changing could be another element (although the mental changes are already great). You write so well, and no matter the story, you'll always have at least one reader! :)
Anonymous
6/17/17, 9:35 PM
Could use more description on each character's body after their debut, but hot concept nevertheless!
Meatbox
6/17/17, 8:37 PM
I know I get it I'll check properly next time and look up the greek alphabet.
Anonymous
6/17/17, 8:32 PM
Great story! Please more! ;-)
Anonymous
6/17/17, 7:41 PM
Love it man, thank you!
Anonymous
6/17/17, 7:19 PM
Awesome work!
Anonymous
6/17/17, 6:23 PM
HOT ending! The part where Ben helped Alex out of his boxers, giving him that little "push" over the edge was the BEST! I wish this gym was real.
Anonymous
6/17/17, 5:59 PM
Nice job , can't wait for part 2
TandySensation
6/17/17, 5:43 PM
I'm being serious. I DID enjoy the story, but I WAS thrown off by the last part ("okay, I guess we're getting off on rape again tonight..."). I do feel strongly about it, but I hadn't meant to sound so preachy and negative (on a porn site). I got an error when I tried to tag it before.