Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/17/17, 3:19 AM
I am loving this series. Grew up in Brooklyn. Subways were part of life. Keep writing.
Anonymous
6/17/17, 3:17 AM
Who the f*** pissed you off? Damn!! I hope your writing is therapeutic.
Anonymous
6/17/17, 1:27 AM
I like where this is going actually. It's not your typical robot story and I really find it hot. Keep writing and keep up the good work!
Anonymous
6/16/17, 10:22 PM
I dont mean to get personal but Edlam, could you tell me how many words, one third of the chapter, 5000 words, or else, to narrate the ginger family in the next chapter? I really miss them... Thx!
Anonymous
6/16/17, 3:36 PM
Love your dark and evil stories. It matches your style of writing. You are doing a great job!!
Ragnarok
6/16/17, 2:42 PM
I agree. It fits this site just fine. However you should not have rushed the end of the story. I mean it had great build up and I definitely would have appreciated lots of smut. Though, I just think you had a lot of potential with this story and you kind of dropped the ball at the end-zone. You may want to consider adding a second chapter or revised version though where the man kidnaps him again and punishes him more. This time with physical and sexual abuse till he breaks and craves it to the point that maybe he helps the guy kidnap his best friend or something along the lines of building a new incest family with the man. Either way you have great talent for this kind of witting; just please in the future don't rush the finished product and post a story when you aren't completely ready to.
Rider Vitalli
6/16/17, 1:06 PM
See, thus is why I'm glad I added this story here as well. Actual reader opinions! Now, I don't believe I read anywhere in the guidelines that a story MUST have a sexual element included to fit the criteria... I do think I COULD have added some smut to better fit what readers want (yes, I understand that most readers use this site one handed ;] ) however. That wasn't the intent whwn I wrote this. It was in fact, as stated, a forced Masculinization story, with an implied mental change. I'll see what I can do to quench the need for sexytime when the writing bug bites again ^_^ Cigarcubatx, Thanks! It's right up my alley as well! If yoy ever wanna chat email me! Titan, having the approval of such a fantastic and noted TF writer such as yourself means alot! Thank you!!
Anonymous
6/16/17, 12:24 PM
really hot!
Anonymous
6/16/17, 10:21 AM
Wow! 👍
Anonymous
6/16/17, 8:36 AM
I think this is an intresting twist on the normal robot/tech control stories