Recent Comments

Ragnarok
6/16/17, 2:42 PM
I agree. It fits this site just fine. However you should not have rushed the end of the story. I mean it had great build up and I definitely would have appreciated lots of smut. Though, I just think you had a lot of potential with this story and you kind of dropped the ball at the end-zone. You may want to consider adding a second chapter or revised version though where the man kidnaps him again and punishes him more. This time with physical and sexual abuse till he breaks and craves it to the point that maybe he helps the guy kidnap his best friend or something along the lines of building a new incest family with the man. Either way you have great talent for this kind of witting; just please in the future don't rush the finished product and post a story when you aren't completely ready to.
Rider Vitalli
6/16/17, 1:06 PM
See, thus is why I'm glad I added this story here as well. Actual reader opinions! Now, I don't believe I read anywhere in the guidelines that a story MUST have a sexual element included to fit the criteria... I do think I COULD have added some smut to better fit what readers want (yes, I understand that most readers use this site one handed ;] ) however. That wasn't the intent whwn I wrote this. It was in fact, as stated, a forced Masculinization story, with an implied mental change. I'll see what I can do to quench the need for sexytime when the writing bug bites again ^_^ Cigarcubatx, Thanks! It's right up my alley as well! If yoy ever wanna chat email me! Titan, having the approval of such a fantastic and noted TF writer such as yourself means alot! Thank you!!
Anonymous
6/16/17, 12:24 PM
really hot!
Anonymous
6/16/17, 10:21 AM
Wow! 👍
Anonymous
6/16/17, 8:36 AM
I think this is an intresting twist on the normal robot/tech control stories
Titan
6/16/17, 7:52 AM
I like this story and think it still deserves to be here. It is a forced transformation and though not directly about sex between two men it has something rather horny coming through. More please!
Anonymous
6/16/17, 6:12 AM
Super hot story!
Anonymous
6/16/17, 6:00 AM
Superb story! Thanks alot man@
cigarcubatx
6/16/17, 5:50 AM
Exactly what I like to read. Right up my alley.
Anonymous
6/16/17, 5:48 AM
GREAT!