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Anonymous
6/15/17, 12:37 PM
This is really good. It's dark, but it's not that dark. A darker story would be Jerry adding Sam's, Andrew's, and James' sons at the end.
JamieTi684
6/15/17, 8:55 AM
This was awesome! I really enjoyed the slow but steady trap Brody put him into. I hope you plan to write more! Did you enjoy writing it?
Jun 13, 2017
Anonymous
6/15/17, 8:46 AM
Really enjoyed this - though I've liked some of your other works, many of them were a bit too cruel for my tastes (at some point for me, it crosses from hot to me feeling bad for the person). This was just the right blend for me!
Apr 12, 2006
Anonymous
6/15/17, 4:44 AM
best story ever!!!!! would like to be a heavy iron property
Jun 13, 2017
Anonymous
6/15/17, 1:56 AM
Absolutely fantastic story! Loved it!
Jun 13, 2017
LongtimeFan
6/15/17, 12:51 AM
I don't often comment on stories other than Hypnothrill's, but this was really something special! I loved how gradually you made the mental changes--it seemed like a perfectly natural slippery slope. And as others have said, the use of the six different personalities showed up strongly in your writing. And the ending was REALLY chilling--realizing that time was becoming meaningless, so the weeks varying so much meant that the boys really would be doing this forever. In short...brilliant! :)
BostonSatyr
6/14/17, 11:47 PM
Great concept!!!!!
Jun 14, 2017
UchihaDEMS
6/14/17, 11:17 PM
Siempre es genial ver historias en mi idioma y tu tumblr tiene buen material~
Anonymous
6/14/17, 11:13 PM
You have Part 4 in here twice.
Jun 13, 2017
Anonymous
6/14/17, 10:16 PM
Awesome story -- love the style and getting all the perspectives. Being brainwashed to shift your priorities no matter what kind of life you lead. Mike and the football guy and the twink guy and the student council guy... whatever you cared about before just fading way...