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Anonymous
6/9/17, 7:48 PM
Awesome
Darmani
6/9/17, 7:29 PM
The feedback loop between the two of them I get but why do you think entire campus World change? I assume the jinn was dipping on any level of masculinity and pushing to more exaggerated levels. At most I could see a contradiction of asking a personality/abstract trait to be altered and stay the same. But it seems ultimately the loop warped reality just Cuz? I don't know if some word or other changes were intended or not. Like chuck to cuck or the seeming ballooning of roomiest. And no clue why every fell to tom/tops control that way Basically the subtle stuff went by and the brazen too fast. The setup and exploration was nice guess wanted more?
Anonymous
6/9/17, 6:47 PM
Great to see a protagonist to sacrifice himself to become a jock. You have a great writing skill.
Anonymous
6/9/17, 6:30 PM
It makes feel shred : )
Anonymous
6/9/17, 6:13 PM
Great to see it. Love it.
Anonymous
6/9/17, 5:45 PM
Is there a chapter 5?
Anonymous
6/9/17, 5:38 PM
MJordan, welcome to the community!!
Anonymous
6/9/17, 4:15 PM
Jones to Gronk or Ertz? Like a 150lbs slender sweetie to a 260lbs hottie? So hot and ambitious!!
Anonymous
6/9/17, 3:54 PM
Can't wait to see the moment Bradly suited up and become a rough and tough star TE, like there is no remnant of kind and thoughtful former self, thanks to Coach's hypnosis and training.
Anonymous
6/9/17, 3:44 PM
Wish you could show us a little bit more about the sessions in the Coach's room with this white noise next time. Nice beginning and promising set-up!!