Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/11/17, 1:42 AM
Great chapter. Notice you stopped using hyperlinks to the web page of the picture. May I ask why? Was always good to see those blogs. Thanks
Anonymous
6/11/17, 1:39 AM
I hope Bradlay staies the same Personalty-wise, I realy like the Loveable Jock Archetype.
biubiubiu
6/11/17, 1:31 AM
I'm waiting for your new stories so long. All of your stories get my dick hard
Anonymous
6/11/17, 12:23 AM
Vinnie, Paulie and Dino -- sounds like the Goombah Hot Guys Network.
Anonymous
6/10/17, 11:17 PM
Love studs!!
Anonymous
6/10/17, 10:50 PM
It's a nice twist as the protagonist is willingly to submit himself to Coach's control while he has no choice. Love the way you show the protagonist's good personality, showing the interactions with his parents. I hope he become an arrogant and cocky jock, a totally different person.
Anonymous
6/10/17, 8:50 PM
NB first sentence. "Came too" = also came, "came to" = regained consciousness
Anonymous
6/10/17, 8:11 PM
Awesome work!!
Anonymous
6/10/17, 7:10 PM
great story!!
Anonymous
6/10/17, 6:59 PM
Loved the story! Please consider writing a longer version! I absolutely loved the premise/reality shift based on insults