Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/9/17, 5:45 PM
Is there a chapter 5?
Anonymous
6/9/17, 5:38 PM
MJordan, welcome to the community!!
Anonymous
6/9/17, 4:15 PM
Jones to Gronk or Ertz? Like a 150lbs slender sweetie to a 260lbs hottie? So hot and ambitious!!
Anonymous
6/9/17, 3:54 PM
Can't wait to see the moment Bradly suited up and become a rough and tough star TE, like there is no remnant of kind and thoughtful former self, thanks to Coach's hypnosis and training.
Anonymous
6/9/17, 3:44 PM
Wish you could show us a little bit more about the sessions in the Coach's room with this white noise next time. Nice beginning and promising set-up!!
Anonymous
6/9/17, 3:20 PM
I appreciate you gave us details without making it redundant. You have raised our expectations. Great job, thanks a lot!'
Anonymous
6/9/17, 3:05 PM
Wow great! hope soon the next parts!!! ;-)
Anonymous
6/9/17, 3:00 PM
Love to see how Bradley become a cocky star jock person. Or, how Coach install that aggressive persona to a smart and kind Bradley.
Anonymous
6/9/17, 12:51 PM
I could foresee Brad become like Vince and have affairs with Coach. You did a great job to make us interested in how he transformed into a star football monster.
Anonymous
6/9/17, 12:48 PM
Can't wait to see the next installment. Well done. Good luck!!