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barrydillon80@gmail.com
6/7/17, 2:20 AM
Nice story and cute drawing! To answer the comment above, it happened to him because he wished for it to meet a hot guy. The submission seemed to be a result of the characters inner desires. More to the point it is a short story; it doesn't need to have all the answers. Take the classic "Monkey's Paw" story. There is no reason that the wishes turn out bad or why the Paw is cursed, it just is
Anonymous
6/7/17, 2:10 AM
Great and intense. One of the best you did xoxo
Anonymous
6/7/17, 2:02 AM
By any chance, Vin had been a slender college guy? The man did have a great choice!! So cool.
Anonymous
6/7/17, 1:46 AM
Great introduction!! Can't wait to see how the man controlled Vinnie and how Vinnie trapped his friends.
Anonymous
6/7/17, 1:26 AM
Dirk was hot from the beginning. Wish you could have had more mind control and hypnosys elements here.
Anonymous
6/7/17, 1:20 AM
F Line? F**k...
Anonymous
6/7/17, 1:19 AM
ShredExtreme, awesome naming. So sexy.
Anonymous
6/7/17, 1:18 AM
Interesting setting!! I'm envious that they were safeguarded by Dirk's inherited wealth. I personally love a nerd to jock, more drastic, change. Still, this one is hot. Please try introducing a mastermind, an apparent evil, who develop and use drugs (protein/steroid/narcotics) against the protagonist and utilize his transformation to promote his plan (creating a mindless trainer or PR model or vampire/zombie creature and expand his minions).
cv02k.len@gmail.com
6/6/17, 11:32 PM
I am incredibly aroused
Willie Cici
6/6/17, 9:50 PM
"The Man" has a name. It will be disclosed in later chapters. For now, he's "the Man."