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AeonFlux
5/30/17, 1:54 PM
Great story Keep on writing
Anonymous
5/30/17, 12:36 PM
Tony just concentrated to training and football (and sex) so much that he did not think hard about other subjects. Good or bad. So hot. well done.
rayn
5/30/17, 12:12 PM
I hope you haven't given up writing, Robert!
Anonymous
5/30/17, 9:06 AM
:D I liked it! And who doesn't love Nightwing :)
Anonymous
5/30/17, 6:02 AM
If the protagonist kept his intelligence, the transformation would not be less drastic than making him dumb. There could be a story with changes of the protagonist's sexual orientation or life-style (muscle growth and hypno)
Anonymous
5/30/17, 5:46 AM
Why do jocks have to be dumb? I've known a few that are very intelligent.
Anonymous
5/30/17, 5:44 AM
It's a niche topic. Won't be surprised by such responses. Willi, thanks!!
Anonymous
5/30/17, 4:23 AM
Very hot!!
Anonymous
5/30/17, 3:40 AM
Sooo hot! I absolutely love it, I hope to see a lot more writing from you in the future. You have a very nice writing style and the premise and execution where great!
Willie Cici
5/30/17, 3:31 AM
I'm always amazed at the reaction stories like this receive. Thanks for the well wishes.