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Anonymous
5/30/17, 12:56 AM
Make Tony physical!!
Anonymous
5/30/17, 12:05 AM
I would suggest that the effects of protein drinks could have been given more focus. It was sufficiently hot but you have done much hotter one; all in all awesomeee!
Anonymous
5/29/17, 10:34 PM
Like the title. Looking forward to this kind of nerd to jock transformation!
Anonymous
5/29/17, 10:32 PM
Amazing!!
Anonymous
5/29/17, 10:21 PM
Great story
Anonymous
5/29/17, 10:13 PM
Wish you could have more brainwash/hypnosis elements like some of your previous writings. You are really good at them. This one did a great job, though!! Keep it up.
Anonymous
5/29/17, 10:08 PM
You did it!! Love you !!
Anonymous
5/29/17, 9:59 PM
This one is my favorite but love to see more of Tony's dumb side or mindless part !! Hope you try another shot. Never get bored to read. Pretty much appreciate it.
Anonymous
5/29/17, 9:39 PM
Great story!! Hope more stories like this to come :)
Rock Creek
5/29/17, 8:58 PM
Some other "powers" ideas - a man who's imagination can cause people he sees to undergo transformations [nice ass!, and then it grows to even larger proportions] - man who can make others be perceived differently. [make strong big cop perceived by others/himself as a Barney Fife weakling, make a skilled athlete/ high school coach into a Lutz), etc. One suggestion: it's a lot hotter if you also give us the changed men's perspective. Like the man at the beginning - does he feel any confusion or disorientation when he suddenly asks the protagonist out? How does his mind allow him to accept it internally? Same with the father/landlord. He's suddenly an incestuous cum whore. Does he feel disorientation? Does he feel new memories of him ALWAYS being this way? That perspective, makes the story even hotter. Just Food for thought. intrigued by this idea and am going to keep reading.