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Anonymous
5/29/17, 9:39 PM
Great story!! Hope more stories like this to come :)
Rock Creek
5/29/17, 8:58 PM
Some other "powers" ideas - a man who's imagination can cause people he sees to undergo transformations [nice ass!, and then it grows to even larger proportions] - man who can make others be perceived differently. [make strong big cop perceived by others/himself as a Barney Fife weakling, make a skilled athlete/ high school coach into a Lutz), etc. One suggestion: it's a lot hotter if you also give us the changed men's perspective. Like the man at the beginning - does he feel any confusion or disorientation when he suddenly asks the protagonist out? How does his mind allow him to accept it internally? Same with the father/landlord. He's suddenly an incestuous cum whore. Does he feel disorientation? Does he feel new memories of him ALWAYS being this way? That perspective, makes the story even hotter. Just Food for thought. intrigued by this idea and am going to keep reading.
Anonymous
5/29/17, 8:31 PM
hottest story ever!
Anonymous
5/29/17, 8:21 PM
N is a word and just that. We give it meaning and context. In this story it is in context. Used as a quote or an accurate descripton of words used in a given situation. As an immigrant from Africa I can say with great authority that it is just a word.
Anonymous
5/29/17, 7:38 PM
Woah! Amazing *applauds, cum flying everywhere*
tattcub
5/29/17, 6:42 PM
Awesome.
Anonymous
5/29/17, 6:09 PM
That was really hot!!
Anonymous
5/29/17, 6:09 PM
As usual, hot!!
Anonymous
5/29/17, 5:51 PM
Great story!! Thank you so much and keep writing!
5/29/17, 3:54 PM
Oh my, I thought it ended at chapter 11, but this is a real rip-roaring finale. (Briefly I was hoping Julius or Eugene would take over Father Anthony....maybe in a sequel.) This is a really colorful story with lots of depth and a couple of surprises. Very, very enjoyable! Thank you for sharing!