Recent Comments

5/28/17, 1:00 PM
Love the historical fiction aspects of the story! This is really enjoyable!
Anonymous
5/28/17, 12:27 PM
Another great story! You are an awesome writer! Wouldn't mind buying a book from you with all your writings. Question: was The Alignment supposed to be left a cliffhanger?
5/28/17, 12:24 PM
Oh my! It's fabulous! There's something *extremely satisfying* when one begins to see how the threads of a flashback story begin to meet up with the story's present tense. (Glad to see that Sam is also aroused by Julius's demonic appearance. :) ) Don't worry about the "false start" chapter 8 - you've made Julius so much more complex here. It also links up and fits with his "world weary" state in which he encounters Eugene. I keep looking forward to future chapters!
Anonymous
5/28/17, 12:14 PM
loved it!
Anonymous
5/28/17, 10:58 AM
Great story! Love the concept and I hope that incest is gonna be a recurring theme
Marvyn
5/28/17, 10:28 AM
Well; I think I've managed to hook the story back to the present. It was the hardest piece I've done so far and I apologise to readers for the previous version of chapter 8. I messed up. Just think of it as an alternate reality... Once again, thanks for all the positive comments.
Anonymous
5/28/17, 9:29 AM
I'm glad you changed the chapter. It didn't bother me that Julius ended up ruthless and cold blooded, but it did bother me that he didn't undergo any character development to get him there from innocent and loyal
Jay
5/28/17, 9:03 AM
excellent job!
Anonymous
5/28/17, 6:45 AM
just realised that they are lucky that it isnt winter :P anyway nice story love that they know what is happening and could do nothing about it but once it happened they just think it normal
Anonymous
5/28/17, 4:41 AM
Imagery and hyperbole to describe the sex. It will be creative and hot.