Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/29/17, 1:14 AM
Amazing story, so creative and H O T!!! Thank you!!
Marvyn
5/29/17, 12:37 AM
Thanks nycboot and tattcub. Scat ain't my thing either, but demons like dat stuff...
TheWanderer
5/29/17, 12:02 AM
This is some exquisite 18+ poetry right here XD
May 25, 2017
Anonymous
5/28/17, 11:46 PM
So hot!!!
tattcub
5/28/17, 10:05 PM
Loved the story and the idea. Thank you for this original work. The only thing that didn't get me was the scat bit but hey, we all have our things. Loved the rest of it. Keep up writing you really have talent. Not just for porn. TC
5/28/17, 8:56 PM
Love it! Thank you for a real mutli-dimensional story!
Anonymous
5/28/17, 7:27 PM
Awesome story!! Keep up the good work!
5/28/17, 4:27 PM
Regarding The Alignment No, The Alignment was not supposed to end on a cliffhanger. At the time of writing it, I received feedback / criticism because the two main characters were actually father and son. And the reader was felt the story had soured because of the incestuous content. This feedback derailed me from writing the story. Well... I should more accurately say that I allowed this feedback to derail me. You see, the incestuous relationship was actually going to become a plot point that ultimately drove the story to its conclusion. So I couldn't remove that I needed the two characters to be father and son. But at the same time, I was left wondering whether I had gone too far, and disgusted my audience, and perverted my story. Again, I felt derailed. I've always wanted to go back and either continue exactly where I left off. Or perhaps start over, and with a few minor edits, rewrite the relationship so it's not so obviously incestuous. But I haven't gone back. In a way, Fusion is very akin to The Alignment. And these two stories share many commonalities. I can't promise I'll ever finish The Alignment. But I have given it a lot of thought. I still just don't know.
Anonymous
5/28/17, 4:10 PM
Loved the "all-american father" talk in such a context
A San Francisco Reader
5/28/17, 3:20 PM
Great first chapter..Like most of the comments, I also enjoyed the incest theme..Also enjoy stories where the characters earlier memories are 'changed' to justify their new behaviors & where they become straight to gay, butch to sissy, etc..Like so many others I enjoy Cop's & also 'skinheads', etc...but whatever you chose to write about, it's a great start !