Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/28/17, 2:12 PM
Great first chapter Echoing some other suggestions, like cops&robbers, or coaches
Anonymous
5/28/17, 1:23 PM
I LOVE that you gave him phimosis. More of this please, long tight foreskins are HOT
5/28/17, 1:14 PM
What a refreshing difference this lyric piece makes on this site. It makes me happy to know that I am one of the contributors (however small) that support this site and enables people to share their creative impulses with a group of like-minded people.
Anonymous
5/28/17, 1:12 PM
nice!
5/28/17, 1:00 PM
Love the historical fiction aspects of the story! This is really enjoyable!
Anonymous
5/28/17, 12:27 PM
Another great story! You are an awesome writer! Wouldn't mind buying a book from you with all your writings. Question: was The Alignment supposed to be left a cliffhanger?
5/28/17, 12:24 PM
Oh my! It's fabulous! There's something *extremely satisfying* when one begins to see how the threads of a flashback story begin to meet up with the story's present tense. (Glad to see that Sam is also aroused by Julius's demonic appearance. :) ) Don't worry about the "false start" chapter 8 - you've made Julius so much more complex here. It also links up and fits with his "world weary" state in which he encounters Eugene. I keep looking forward to future chapters!
Anonymous
5/28/17, 12:14 PM
loved it!
Anonymous
5/28/17, 10:58 AM
Great story! Love the concept and I hope that incest is gonna be a recurring theme
Marvyn
5/28/17, 10:28 AM
Well; I think I've managed to hook the story back to the present. It was the hardest piece I've done so far and I apologise to readers for the previous version of chapter 8. I messed up. Just think of it as an alternate reality... Once again, thanks for all the positive comments.