Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/28/17, 4:10 PM
Loved the "all-american father" talk in such a context
A San Francisco Reader
5/28/17, 3:20 PM
Great first chapter..Like most of the comments, I also enjoyed the incest theme..Also enjoy stories where the characters earlier memories are 'changed' to justify their new behaviors & where they become straight to gay, butch to sissy, etc..Like so many others I enjoy Cop's & also 'skinheads', etc...but whatever you chose to write about, it's a great start !
Anonymous
5/28/17, 2:12 PM
Great first chapter Echoing some other suggestions, like cops&robbers, or coaches
Anonymous
5/28/17, 1:23 PM
I LOVE that you gave him phimosis. More of this please, long tight foreskins are HOT
5/28/17, 1:14 PM
What a refreshing difference this lyric piece makes on this site. It makes me happy to know that I am one of the contributors (however small) that support this site and enables people to share their creative impulses with a group of like-minded people.
Anonymous
5/28/17, 1:12 PM
nice!
5/28/17, 1:00 PM
Love the historical fiction aspects of the story! This is really enjoyable!
Anonymous
5/28/17, 12:27 PM
Another great story! You are an awesome writer! Wouldn't mind buying a book from you with all your writings. Question: was The Alignment supposed to be left a cliffhanger?
5/28/17, 12:24 PM
Oh my! It's fabulous! There's something *extremely satisfying* when one begins to see how the threads of a flashback story begin to meet up with the story's present tense. (Glad to see that Sam is also aroused by Julius's demonic appearance. :) ) Don't worry about the "false start" chapter 8 - you've made Julius so much more complex here. It also links up and fits with his "world weary" state in which he encounters Eugene. I keep looking forward to future chapters!
Anonymous
5/28/17, 12:14 PM
loved it!