Recent Comments

Marvyn
5/28/17, 10:28 AM
Well; I think I've managed to hook the story back to the present. It was the hardest piece I've done so far and I apologise to readers for the previous version of chapter 8. I messed up. Just think of it as an alternate reality... Once again, thanks for all the positive comments.
Anonymous
5/28/17, 9:29 AM
I'm glad you changed the chapter. It didn't bother me that Julius ended up ruthless and cold blooded, but it did bother me that he didn't undergo any character development to get him there from innocent and loyal
Jay
5/28/17, 9:03 AM
excellent job!
Anonymous
5/28/17, 6:45 AM
just realised that they are lucky that it isnt winter :P anyway nice story love that they know what is happening and could do nothing about it but once it happened they just think it normal
Anonymous
5/28/17, 4:41 AM
Imagery and hyperbole to describe the sex. It will be creative and hot.
Anonymous
5/28/17, 4:39 AM
Very arousing. Need more cops, coaches, gangs, and foot fetish
BostonSatyr
5/28/17, 2:40 AM
Love the concept, and the idea of audience participstion/suggestions. Excellent prose too.
5/28/17, 2:17 AM
Interesting alterations (and I'm glad you made less sympathy toward Sam). You may not realize but for some of us, the description of the demon's physical attributes are so sexy!
5/28/17, 1:43 AM
Thank you for the kind comments! I am really bad at writing sex scenes but that's definitely something I'll try harder in the future.
Anonymous
5/28/17, 1:28 AM
Great start, thank you! Very hot