Recent Comments

Jay
5/28/17, 9:03 AM
excellent job!
Anonymous
5/28/17, 6:45 AM
just realised that they are lucky that it isnt winter :P anyway nice story love that they know what is happening and could do nothing about it but once it happened they just think it normal
Anonymous
5/28/17, 4:41 AM
Imagery and hyperbole to describe the sex. It will be creative and hot.
Anonymous
5/28/17, 4:39 AM
Very arousing. Need more cops, coaches, gangs, and foot fetish
BostonSatyr
5/28/17, 2:40 AM
Love the concept, and the idea of audience participstion/suggestions. Excellent prose too.
5/28/17, 2:17 AM
Interesting alterations (and I'm glad you made less sympathy toward Sam). You may not realize but for some of us, the description of the demon's physical attributes are so sexy!
5/28/17, 1:43 AM
Thank you for the kind comments! I am really bad at writing sex scenes but that's definitely something I'll try harder in the future.
Anonymous
5/28/17, 1:28 AM
Great start, thank you! Very hot
Anonymous
5/28/17, 12:25 AM
Heart wrenchingly beautiful! So sexy and poetic! Lovely. More please! Master.
Anonymous
5/28/17, 12:13 AM
I have re read this story a number of times and it makes me come every time! Sometimes twice!! I would LOVE to have another chapter.