Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/28/17, 9:29 AM
I'm glad you changed the chapter. It didn't bother me that Julius ended up ruthless and cold blooded, but it did bother me that he didn't undergo any character development to get him there from innocent and loyal
Jay
5/28/17, 9:03 AM
excellent job!
Anonymous
5/28/17, 6:45 AM
just realised that they are lucky that it isnt winter :P anyway nice story love that they know what is happening and could do nothing about it but once it happened they just think it normal
Anonymous
5/28/17, 4:41 AM
Imagery and hyperbole to describe the sex. It will be creative and hot.
Anonymous
5/28/17, 4:39 AM
Very arousing. Need more cops, coaches, gangs, and foot fetish
BostonSatyr
5/28/17, 2:40 AM
Love the concept, and the idea of audience participstion/suggestions. Excellent prose too.
5/28/17, 2:17 AM
Interesting alterations (and I'm glad you made less sympathy toward Sam). You may not realize but for some of us, the description of the demon's physical attributes are so sexy!
5/28/17, 1:43 AM
Thank you for the kind comments! I am really bad at writing sex scenes but that's definitely something I'll try harder in the future.
Anonymous
5/28/17, 1:28 AM
Great start, thank you! Very hot
Anonymous
5/28/17, 12:25 AM
Heart wrenchingly beautiful! So sexy and poetic! Lovely. More please! Master.