Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/26/17, 8:24 PM
So funny! So hot!!
Anonymous
5/26/17, 8:06 PM
Awesome
Anonymous
5/26/17, 6:39 PM
Yeah. I was kinda hoping for an explanation. We saw 5 days of slow transformation. But maybe a little reasoning behind the transformation. I just sorta thought that the way it is, this story fizzles out.
Ragnarok
5/26/17, 3:11 PM
This truly was a great series. I enjoyed it a lot. However I think you could add one final day or night that might tie the story up and fully answer the question of how this all happened and who was behind it. Just a thought, great job and please keep writing more stories as hott as this. :)
Marvyn
5/26/17, 2:50 PM
All will be revealed nycboot...
Trick
5/26/17, 2:35 PM
Great job! I loved your additions to the story and I enjoyed how you took advantage of how this website can post daily and corresponded what was happening in the story with the actual days of the week. Again I'm thrilled that this story was revived and I enjoyed how it was adapted to this website. Keep up the good work.
LongtimeFan
5/26/17, 11:56 AM
PHENOMENAL! What an ending! Lots of sex, and a complete brainwashing for all parties. I also like how more and more of what the guys were saying during exercises was slowly revealed, as if...well, as if the characters were learning the language they were using gradually. Another fantastic story, Hypnothrill! You really are one of the best on this site. :)
5/26/17, 9:18 AM
Overall, a very nice story with nice pacing. I especially liked the almost resigned mood in the card game at night. And, of course, the ending.
Anonymous
5/26/17, 5:44 AM
Great job. Thanks!
Anonymous
5/26/17, 4:05 AM
Great story! As usual!!