Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/23/17, 9:06 PM
love it!
Anonymous
5/23/17, 8:55 PM
I would be really happy if you did! And there's one more reason I prefer this story to your new one! (well, two actually) 1) In the new story, the protagonist actually WANTS to become a straight jock. Yes, he finds them gross and stupid, but ultimately appears to have a secret fantasy to be like them. (unless of course we learn later on that this desire of his was also inplanted via hypnosis or similar means) Here, the change is involuntary and is actually a punishment for being so stuck-up and racist, which to me is WAAAAAY hotter! Plus, the fact that he becomes the very thing he HATES so much! Absolutely brilliant! and 2) While there is a gay guy turning straight in the new story, he seems to be guite butch from the get go, since he's working out and stuff. He probably is a top anyways, so the transformation to a straight jock isn't THAT radicall! While here, we have a pretty fem guy, who always bottoms and is - on top of all that - a NEAT-FREAK!!! Talk about a complete and utter transformation! Now, of course I realize that because the "before" and the "after" are sooo different here, it must be a HELL of a lot more difficult to write and create a flowing narration, but you seem to be doing just fine up to this part. That's my two bits on your work and I'm stopping now. In the end it's your choice whether or not to continue this story. I understand that once your "hard-on" with a story is down, it's more than likely to remain down for ever, no matter what other people tell you.
Anonymous
5/23/17, 8:08 PM
Fusion is great. Cannot wait for the rest. I love your work and am glad to see some new submissions from you!
Anonymous
5/23/17, 8:01 PM
more please !!!
Anonymous
5/23/17, 7:46 PM
These stories are always better when they can retain some awareness or regain awareness. :)
Robert M
5/23/17, 7:44 PM
Love your story... Hoping for more chapters
AeonFlux
5/23/17, 7:35 PM
Keep on developing Fusion.......it was hot...
Anonymous
5/23/17, 6:37 PM
Yes I agree one the best you have done
BostonSatyr
5/23/17, 4:44 PM
Interesting premise. Keep writing. Show us where youre going...
Spandexlad
5/23/17, 11:45 AM
Good stories. The first one I found more erotically charged for me than this one. Aside from the mother stuff, which I didn't find surprising, although I hoped that she was the one who took the car, I think the set up is a little longer than I would have like and would have liked a little bit more at the end of showing us their new life. I really enjoyed the horror movie aspect of us knowing Jerry's in the house and Sammy hiding from him. I would have liked to see more of that cat and mouse. It certainly sparked an idea of a story for me.