Recent Comments

5/21/17, 10:36 PM
I totally despise smoking, but kept with this story. It is amazing on several levels. The dialogue seems so natural - it doesn't "read" but "speaks" - it seems so authentic. And now you're getting into historical fiction - makes it all the more fun! Someday, someone is going to write a dissertation on gay male porn and I'm sure there'll be an ample chapter on black gay male porn. This story should be a major part of that chapter. It is so exciting and gripping (and the author says so many things that a white person wouldn't dare write). Many kudos and I look forward to more!
UchihaDEMS
5/21/17, 10:03 PM
loved the concept. The story is fine, I am not into piss or watersports but anyway, keep it coming. I would love to read more.
A San Francisco Reader
5/21/17, 8:30 PM
Enjoyed this [I hope] only first part...Here's hoping there are many more 'changes' to come....I personally enjoy dumbed down jock's & it would be extra exciting if this happens to him..from your #'s I'm wondering if he going to become a big BLACK stud & if s , he gets some heavy mental changes, [perhapes fully forgetting who he org. was ??] as his body continues to morph...Keep up the good work !
5/21/17, 7:49 PM
Very promising.
Marvyn
5/21/17, 7:04 PM
Thank you - I enjoyed this very much. I like how you've kept your character's voice constant all the way through, despite all the changes that are happening to him. Good job.
Anonymous
5/21/17, 5:53 PM
Too many whilsts
Anonymous
5/21/17, 5:14 PM
Would be possible for you to add a hot cop in the next chapter? I'd love to have a handsome cop in a motorcycle, with tall shiny boots, being turned into a piss loving himbo!
A San Francisco Reader
5/21/17, 5:13 PM
A great beginning...here's hoping we don't have too long a wait for the next chapter[s]...Also love the 'piss' angle, we haven't had a good 'golden shower' themed story her fo some time...plus I enjoy 'dummed-down' guys which it appears is also part of the plot [??]...REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE FUTURE !!
Anonymous
5/21/17, 4:16 PM
Magnificent! I'm anxious to know what's gonna happen!
Anonymous
5/21/17, 11:17 AM
So glad that you to advice and continued with a second part of entry Hope you do same for the Gainz story As the boys are beefed up and dumbed down but for who and why