Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/22/17, 3:09 AM
wow, nice, looking forward to more!
Anonymous
5/22/17, 2:37 AM
Looking forward to the stories of the other two
Anonymous
5/22/17, 1:34 AM
Otro Gran relato porfavor actualiza pronto!
Anonymous
5/22/17, 12:52 AM
Good so far. But, as some others posted piss or watersports kind of turn me off.
Anonymous
5/22/17, 12:45 AM
Awesome work
5/21/17, 10:36 PM
I totally despise smoking, but kept with this story. It is amazing on several levels. The dialogue seems so natural - it doesn't "read" but "speaks" - it seems so authentic. And now you're getting into historical fiction - makes it all the more fun! Someday, someone is going to write a dissertation on gay male porn and I'm sure there'll be an ample chapter on black gay male porn. This story should be a major part of that chapter. It is so exciting and gripping (and the author says so many things that a white person wouldn't dare write). Many kudos and I look forward to more!
UchihaDEMS
5/21/17, 10:03 PM
loved the concept. The story is fine, I am not into piss or watersports but anyway, keep it coming. I would love to read more.
A San Francisco Reader
5/21/17, 8:30 PM
Enjoyed this [I hope] only first part...Here's hoping there are many more 'changes' to come....I personally enjoy dumbed down jock's & it would be extra exciting if this happens to him..from your #'s I'm wondering if he going to become a big BLACK stud & if s , he gets some heavy mental changes, [perhapes fully forgetting who he org. was ??] as his body continues to morph...Keep up the good work !
5/21/17, 7:49 PM
Very promising.
Marvyn
5/21/17, 7:04 PM
Thank you - I enjoyed this very much. I like how you've kept your character's voice constant all the way through, despite all the changes that are happening to him. Good job.