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Anonymous
5/21/17, 4:16 PM
Magnificent! I'm anxious to know what's gonna happen!
Anonymous
5/21/17, 11:17 AM
So glad that you to advice and continued with a second part of entry Hope you do same for the Gainz story As the boys are beefed up and dumbed down but for who and why
Anonymous
5/21/17, 10:56 AM
Ended up feeling kinda bad for Steve tbh
Anonymous
5/21/17, 10:40 AM
Please continue ! So hot
TheWamderer
5/21/17, 9:51 AM
So much so that I really wanted to ask: Do you work in the medical field? XDD ...unless this is common knowledge
Anonymous
5/21/17, 9:27 AM
Excellent work...great attention to detail
Marvyn
5/21/17, 8:06 AM
Again, thank you for your kind words Boone. I feel humbled by your praise and I will try to live up to your high expectations. I'm taking this story in a radical direction in part 4 - hope you like it.
Anonymous
5/21/17, 7:14 AM
Really great looking forward to the next chapter, could you be an it more descriptive of these people though? Other than that great first story
Boone
5/21/17, 6:45 AM
Hi again! Nice to see you posted a new story, and man, what a great story! The description is great, the characters are interesting, the plot is intriguing, every chapter ends in the exact point... I simpy adore it, you're very talented. What I like the most is that your characters awakes simpaty and concern. They are not a bunch of objects only to awaken horniness and erections. In the deep, the whole genre of mental/physical transformation it's horror. I mean, it's about taking advantage of a victim, and twist and steal their life, or sometimes even destroy their life. That's pretty terrifying and sad! However, most of the writers are focused on the erotic part of it, the dominion, and the horrific elements are softened or minimized. Also, the lenght of the story is often to small to generate any kind of empathy. I'm not saying it as a negative criticism to other writers, I understand that many of them are not interested in generate empathy, they just want to write something hot and fun, and I'm totally with that. Sometimes I just want to read a story for pure pleasure, and that's totally fine, but I'm glad to find surprises like your story, with something different. In the few stories that you've uploaded here, I've found myself becoming surprisingly interested on the fate of the characters and the people around them, and feeling sorry and empathy. That's a great achivement! Keep working! you're doing awesome stories.
May 19, 2017
5/21/17, 6:09 AM
I'm a firm believer that there's multiple ideal partners out there, you just have to find them. Sounds to me like your ideal partner will find them all in you :D