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Anonymous
5/21/17, 9:27 AM
Excellent work...great attention to detail
Marvyn
5/21/17, 8:06 AM
Again, thank you for your kind words Boone. I feel humbled by your praise and I will try to live up to your high expectations. I'm taking this story in a radical direction in part 4 - hope you like it.
Anonymous
5/21/17, 7:14 AM
Really great looking forward to the next chapter, could you be an it more descriptive of these people though? Other than that great first story
Boone
5/21/17, 6:45 AM
Hi again! Nice to see you posted a new story, and man, what a great story! The description is great, the characters are interesting, the plot is intriguing, every chapter ends in the exact point... I simpy adore it, you're very talented. What I like the most is that your characters awakes simpaty and concern. They are not a bunch of objects only to awaken horniness and erections. In the deep, the whole genre of mental/physical transformation it's horror. I mean, it's about taking advantage of a victim, and twist and steal their life, or sometimes even destroy their life. That's pretty terrifying and sad! However, most of the writers are focused on the erotic part of it, the dominion, and the horrific elements are softened or minimized. Also, the lenght of the story is often to small to generate any kind of empathy. I'm not saying it as a negative criticism to other writers, I understand that many of them are not interested in generate empathy, they just want to write something hot and fun, and I'm totally with that. Sometimes I just want to read a story for pure pleasure, and that's totally fine, but I'm glad to find surprises like your story, with something different. In the few stories that you've uploaded here, I've found myself becoming surprisingly interested on the fate of the characters and the people around them, and feeling sorry and empathy. That's a great achivement! Keep working! you're doing awesome stories.
May 19, 2017
5/21/17, 6:09 AM
I'm a firm believer that there's multiple ideal partners out there, you just have to find them. Sounds to me like your ideal partner will find them all in you :D
May 19, 2017
xORRiNx
5/21/17, 6:08 AM
I think my ideal boyfriend needs to be OK with 37 different roleplay characters haha
May 19, 2017
5/21/17, 6:04 AM
So you're happy with where you're going...good. That was the point being made. If you want that life, keep pursuing it. For me, in my real life, being a gay dude who is more than content with being gay, I'd rather have a hot gay guy. To each their own. Mentioning conversion therapy in my comment was not in reference to what you have written. As I explained, this kind of story of a gay guy being turned straight could easily remind someone of gays being 'turned' straight in conversion therapy. Didn't think that needed explaining again because...well, I'd explained it. Wrote the comment to put it in perspective that if you enjoy what is happening to you, that's all that matters and we can't control you. But, clearly, based on many of your previous stories and the comment sections, it feels like you go for emotional responses with your work. Can't deny it's successful. Good work!
May 19, 2017
xORRiNx
5/21/17, 5:15 AM
Where did I type the words conversion therapy in here damn 🤣. Isn't it possible that the straight mind is so beautiful when it's attached to a cocky jock guy that we visualize a transformstion into such a beast? To have that life is a hot fantasy. That's what this story is dude.
May 19, 2017
TimNJ
5/21/17, 5:08 AM
I'm pretty certain that the habituates of straight porn fiction aficionados would react even more intensely if gay conversation stories were randomly dropped into their site. Therefore the real-life implications of stories such as this one necessitate the reaction it has received.
Good to read a new story from one of my all time favorite authors
5/21/17, 4:54 AM
Keep 'em cumming