Recent Comments

May 19, 2017
Anonymous
5/19/17, 5:17 PM
I liked the progress overall. It's nice seeing the subtle changes going on. Granted, I'm not a fan of reading about porn or sex, so I try to skip past those areas when mentioned, but it's clear that you can see the changes happening bit by bit. Well done.
TheWanderer
5/19/17, 5:09 PM
Just pointing out: Sam's problem with his boss/work is still unsolved since they don't remember anything
Anonymous
5/19/17, 4:08 PM
Form and substance, the two parts of every story Substance -- incredible. This was a great story. The pace and the sex was great. Form -- When you write, that's part 1. Part 2 is 'edit'. Part 2 lasts longer than Part 1. Especially if English is not your first language, use MSWord and the review tools that will check spelling, grammar and usage. It will greatly improve your story and make it more readable.
Willie Cici
5/19/17, 3:58 PM
I hope this sequel that people suggested fits the bill. Enjoy!!
Anonymous
5/19/17, 3:54 PM
Fun story!!
May 19, 2017
Anonymous
5/19/17, 3:53 PM
This was so slow and plodding that I lost interest.
Marvyn
5/19/17, 3:00 PM
Part 5 is there now; it disappeared because I wasn't happy with a few things and edited it. Thanks for the positive feedback. I'm working on a new story called 'Incubus' if you wish to check it out...
Marvyn
5/19/17, 2:49 PM
Buffet issue corrected
Anonymous
5/19/17, 2:28 PM
Awesome! Reminds me of Interview with the Vampire. You may have a new Lestat on your hands.
Anonymous
5/19/17, 2:28 PM
Wow! Awesome series!