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Anonymous
5/17/17, 12:01 AM
and what About Samael AKA the Eden Serpent AKA Death himself?
Anonymous
5/16/17, 11:35 PM
This was excellent. I liked the way the narrative moved through the thoughts of the two characters. I especially liked that Scott retains his awareness of what is happening, but just can no longer control himself. The humiliations were perfect for him. Of course, now that he is off the football team, there goes his sports scholarship. No matter, he was now too dumb to stay in uni any longer. His entire future will now revolve around keeping himself fit for whatever Chris has planned for him. Heh heh heh... Thanks for such a great story!
slave 499508824
5/16/17, 11:27 PM
Great story I could see myself in Dereks place I hope there is more.
Anonymous
5/16/17, 9:43 PM
Hot!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
5/16/17, 7:41 PM
Really enjoying this series, well done!
Anonymous
5/16/17, 6:36 PM
I totally have no idea what all the BS with the father had to do in this story. It started so amazing and then you totally ruined it.
TheWanderer
5/16/17, 6:29 PM
Duuuuuuud- Wait, did you do that?
Anonymous
5/16/17, 6:07 PM
Swish, swish ; )
bonniefg@googlemail.com
5/16/17, 4:50 PM
i almost busted handsfree, which in other words mean that you did an amazing job!
Anonymous
5/16/17, 3:56 PM
Dude that was excellent!!