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9/3/24, 12:50 PM
Finding this was a very pleasant surprise. I figured there would have been a longer break before a new series started. And you dove right in with a lot of action at the start. Those machines were really cool. Like spiders and face huggers at the same time. And with a new form of control over the victims being from an external source instead of internal (mental). Though it seems tech is a repetitive counter to super powers. And if true, what beats tech? And it seems this series will have multiple threads going throughout the series with both Kurt and the masked guy. Definitely looking forward to how all that intertwines.

9/3/24, 2:31 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Happy to surprise you! And, yeah,... that wasn't a long break. I think I've spent more time writing individual chapters than the length of that one break! I'd started writing something else that caught my interest, but then I kept getting ideas for THIS and,... urgh,... _call it a 'working lunch'!_ Glad you're liking the new dangers being brought to the table. You touch on an interesting point. I guess the Powers vs Tech argument can be seen as a reflection of our most important lesson as humans; it's easier to improve our tools than to improve ourselves! It's what elevates us above other species, so even when super-powers can be drawn into the equation that suggests it may well be easier for someone to match that 'boost' through some tool. Either way, we'll see why the masked man's new weapons are so effective soon enough,...

9/6/24, 6:12 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Well thank you, but I think you give me a bit too much credit. I was more narrowly considering the story. When it comes to opposing sides in a conflict, the only way to match tech is either with the same tech or you have to upgrade. In this series we have seen superpowers go unmatched and then got countered with inhibitors. Along with other tools like the brainwashing and amplifiers. Then we saw when the two got put together and this lead to Tri-Hard's defeat. Now we see the combination of tech and powers on an incorporated level with the these 'power rangers'. To then be countered by a greater tech. Which lead to whatever is next. And however that influences the dynamic between the characters, the plot, and the overall path the story goes.
9/5/24, 11:46 PM
The feedback loop is a natural mechanism of biology and is widely used in technology. Drone is a combination of biology and technology, so it is perfect to use a feedback mechanism to reprogram it. btw, I think this is also the reason why a person becomes a loyal reader: Reading rubbrsome’s story makes me happy and horny, Missing a chapter makes me frustrated and anxious, I will keep reading, I won’t miss, I’m trapped in rubbrsome’s feedback training.

9/6/24, 1:26 AM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) If the drone checks back every three days, it won't miss the next chapter. There will be nine chapter, and the next chapter posts on September 7th.

9/6/24, 5:12 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) The drone will check back every three days, it will read every chapter, it will be pleasured.
9/6/24, 3:30 AM
Oh yeah, that's good stuff. Rock hard buddy haha. ❤️

9/6/24, 4:37 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks that means a lot 😁 I still need to take a couple more passes over it to get all the errors / spelling mistakes sorted 😳
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9/6/24, 4:29 PM
Great chapter!! Love it and hope for more!!
9/6/24, 4:09 PM
What I'm getting from doctor & dad's comment is that Mr Rite & Adam had fuck him more than once but he kept losing his memories during "training" and each time he got better at being a fag? That's hot.
9/6/24, 3:54 PM
Amazing story! Can't wait to read more of your transformations!!
9/6/24, 3:38 PM
Fantastic story! I love the transformation caused by the scally's scent and smooth shiny gear. It's so hot that the bruvs swap gear - sharing their scents and proud to wear each other's smelly socks, briefs and trackies. Can't wait to read more!!
Sep 6, 2024
9/6/24, 3:38 PM
This is quite a clever way to build up a sexual dynamic from an outside perspective and foster the tension of a watcher who wishes he could be a part of it! Very hot and intriguing.
9/6/24, 1:52 PM
another great chapter, cant remember but have the police been converted yet? be good to have them in their leather uniforms..they would be able to deal with any complaints
9/6/24, 1:35 PM
This is so awesome! I can't wait to see more of strait laced Ryan's downfall. Any chance of Dave next chapter completely and utterly debasing him in front of his wife while she doesn't bat an eye? Just completely degrading him and demeaning him, this proud heterosexual man in his own home. Would also be hot if he commands Ryan to wake up mentally, but physically unable to resist him while his wife just agrees, while Ryan is agahst in horror at whats being done to him. All while Dave details his intentions.