Recent Comments

May 4, 2012
Anonymous
5/17/17, 7:06 PM
Love this story would like to sequel to it
5/17/17, 6:58 PM
I liked this. You write well and I'm happy to see my early fears about the way this was headed were wrong.
May 17, 2017
Anonymous
5/17/17, 6:21 PM
Wow
May 17, 2017
Anonymous
5/17/17, 4:58 PM
It would be awesome to have a sequel to this one.
May 17, 2017
Anonymous
5/17/17, 4:26 PM
The latest hit from you!! Love dumb down muscle growth story : ). Yummy
Anonymous
5/17/17, 3:42 PM
The boys works in a mechanics shop that specializes in pick-up trucks. Adam owns a pick-up truck. Does he own the mechanics shop or is he a customer? Either way, it's hot to think about those situations.
Anonymous
5/17/17, 3:39 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
May 17, 2017
Anonymous
5/17/17, 3:38 PM
See that last comment, Willie. The problem with you stories of late are the pics. You assume people look at the pics. They fill in the details. That's not writing. It may be good story telling, but not writing.
May 17, 2017
Anonymous
5/17/17, 3:31 PM
Kinda quick and didn't explain the transformation or mind changes that happened. Definitively not won of your best.
Anonymous
5/17/17, 2:58 PM
Great Story. Change ihm someone more. Hairstyle, Piercings and tattoo.