Recent Comments

May 17, 2017
Anonymous
5/17/17, 3:31 PM
Kinda quick and didn't explain the transformation or mind changes that happened. Definitively not won of your best.
Anonymous
5/17/17, 2:58 PM
Great Story. Change ihm someone more. Hairstyle, Piercings and tattoo.
Marvyn
5/17/17, 2:54 PM
Thank YOU dougkent60. It's comments like yours that make me keen to carry on writing.
May 17, 2017
Anonymous
5/17/17, 2:49 PM
Excellent story!
dougkent60
5/17/17, 1:28 PM
Awesomely hot AND well written, many writers on this site should read your work and try to emulate it. Terrific. THANK YOU
Anonymous
5/17/17, 11:55 AM
This story was so hot! I wish you could write entire novels of your stories! I'd definitely buy a book written by you.
Anonymous
5/17/17, 10:05 AM
fucking hot
Anonymous
5/17/17, 6:09 AM
that was hott!
Anonymous
5/17/17, 5:07 AM
Please cum back and write......
Anonymous
5/17/17, 5:01 AM
really well written, find myself eagerly awaiting each installment!