Recent Comments

screamingmoist
5/15/17, 1:57 PM
Thanks for reading!
May 14, 2017
Anonymous
5/15/17, 11:41 AM
Loved how this story progressed. Great writing and can't wait for more
Anonymous
5/15/17, 8:44 AM
enjoying the series, well written!
Anonymous
5/15/17, 7:13 AM
Damn! What a hot story! You're describing their changing roles so well that I can't wait for more
Anonymous
5/15/17, 3:27 AM
Nice read!
BostonSatyr
5/15/17, 12:39 AM
I agree the murder of the mother was a bit of a downer. I would scrolled past monino of her, and don't feel it adds significantly to the story. That being said, this. Is. A. Great. New. Series!! I'd expand upon it, have the bikers get stuck in the ranch, never able to leave, falling under the spell. Make to sons get kinkiest kinkier over time... the static nature of the spell limits you, unnecessarily. Perhaps the next stop could be a fire house, or a family of cops? Bravo on these stories & looking fwd to more installments.
5/14/17, 11:48 PM
Holy shiiiiiiit yes.
May 14, 2017
Anonymous
5/14/17, 9:42 PM
That was one of the best stories that I've read on this site in a long time. Good style, good flow. Everything about it was incredible. I'm still hard.
Anonymous
5/14/17, 9:31 PM
Not only are you excellently writing the subtle changes in both guys, but the transformation aspects are hot as fuck. I actually love the combining of the personalities. Well done and very well written. Can't wait for the next few chapters.
Anonymous
5/14/17, 6:44 PM
Great story