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5/13/17, 5:14 PM
Many thanks, I thoroughly enjoyed the story.
Anonymous
5/13/17, 4:31 PM
Don't usually post here, but just wanted to make my opinion known after reading these comments.... lol Please don't stop writing stories like these if the muse hits you. I don't think it's too dark at all, and enjoyed the read!
May 12, 2017
Anonymous
5/13/17, 4:16 PM
Great story...
UchihaDEMS
5/13/17, 4:14 PM
To each his own. I mean, it was amazingly written, described and all... hot as well, but I think maybe the mother part was too much. Don't get me wrong, this makes it more realistic I think? Anyway, I would love to keep on reading. And you should write what you feel like. You got talen so keep it up!
Anonymous
5/13/17, 3:28 PM
I agree a little dark i guess especially the mother scenario
Anonymous
5/13/17, 3:23 PM
This one got really dark - so datk that there was no pleasure for me reading despite, as mentioned above, it being very well and eloquently written.
Anonymous
5/13/17, 2:38 PM
I like the premise... I hope you do something HOT with it
5/13/17, 1:02 PM
Ah, sorry for being unclear. It's not as if I found the story bad. The story is interesting, it has potential and I will be reading the next part. Possession is fairly rare here, too, and, as I said earlier, you write well. High intelligence is not troubling by itself, but it feels like a contradiction in the robber, considering his lifestyle. The stereotype... well, let's get back to that depending on how this continues. But it is a fair point that I'm also kinda complaining about deviating from a stereotype robber. (It's just that, to me, to be credible as a character a small-time robber needs to have his intelligence compensated with, say, poor impulse control.) Naturally you're under no obligation to please me. I was trying to be constructive, but I guess my tone was a bit too sharp. Still, do note what jarred me most was the "do my homework"-thing and scale by that.
Anonymous
5/13/17, 12:49 PM
Amazing. Love the big butt
Anonymous
5/13/17, 12:30 PM
Very well written, though it's too dark for me.