Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/13/17, 12:30 PM
Very well written, though it's too dark for me.
Marvyn
5/13/17, 12:12 PM
Sorry you didn't like the story, Viridian. Not sure what you mean by race stereotypes - I actually like badass niggas, being one myself. If people like this exist [and they do] they are not stereotypes, really. I also made this guy highly intelligent, but that also seemed to trouble you. My bad, I guess.
5/13/17, 11:46 AM
What jarred me most was the "do my homework"-thing transported from grade school into university. The robber's narrative voice seems way too bright for the life he was leading, unless he just got a brain upgrade. What's with the race stereotypes? You can do race change without wading neck-deep in "badass niggas".
5/13/17, 11:01 AM
This was very well written. The racist stereotype nature of the changes makes me uneasy liking this, but I justify it by thinking the reality changer was a really nasty piece of work.
5/13/17, 10:46 AM
As other have said, hot. I liked it a lot and this was definitely not too subtle. Good progression, too.
May 12, 2017
5/13/17, 10:42 AM
This was fun. More of the Captain, please.
5/13/17, 10:38 AM
Excellent writing, as usual. I liked the way you got into Hank's thoughts, and the seeming camaraderie at the house. I felt like the revelations at the end were about to fall into the commonplace, but then you mostly skirted that with sheer hotness and being enthusiastically detailed . Good work :-)
NoToTrump
5/13/17, 8:51 AM
Moar?
AeonFlux
5/13/17, 8:33 AM
You can't just stop in the middle...........how's going further ???????? What happens next ????
Anonymous
5/13/17, 8:07 AM
oh no ... so does that mean we will wait for the next chapter of the Re-Educator longer than expected >_< ??? I really miss the ginger family ...